The Dark Rainbow

There once lived a boy named Kris, it was his birthday. So he went to Dark Rainbow with his friends John and Luke. Later that day the Dark Rainbow’s manager made the rides faster and scarier. When John and Luke came by Kris’s house. Kris was ready, but he didn't like the smell of his perfume. When they got there it wasn’t a big line as always. They had four hundred and thirty two dollars. When they got inside they went to the nearest ride and that was the rolling barrel. They had to go inside the barrel and roll down the hill. Once they up top of the hill, John said “Are you ready guys?,” “Yep,” shouted Luke. They all rolled down to the bottom of the hill.

Next they went to the roller coaster, the roller coaster wasn't full, they were the only ones in line. When they got inside the roller-coaster, they all were holding hands. “3,2,1” said the lady. They all shouted “AHHHHHH!!!!” When they got back to the roller coaster house again, the roller coaster didn't stop it kept going. The lady has fallen asleep and spilt her water into the control panel. “Help!” said John.

When the manager knew that the roller coaster hasn't been stopping, he called 911. The cops came with the ambulance as fast as they could. “What is going on,” said the cops, “The roller coaster isn't stopping. The cops tried throwing a rope and pulling it down but it did not work. They threw a rock in the corner of the ride but it did not stop. Then when they came with a big swimming pool, they shouted to John, Kris and Luke to jump in the swimming pool.

Luke jumped out first he was about to faint because he was a big fear of heights. When he jumped off he did a big bomb into the swimming pool. Next was John. John was a swimmer, he loved to dive off from big heights and do big splashes. When he dived off he did 3 back flips. Last was Kris, Kris didn't like water especially cold water. When he stood up, he fainted and landed on the swimming pool. “I think he fainted because of his perfume,” wondered Luke.

The next day Kris was in the hospital and was very sick. When his friends came over, they had pizza and fish’n’chips. When all his family and friends left. He felt lonely and fell to sleep. The day after that his whole family came over to visit and give him flowers. John and Luke came over and gave him a lot of presents. 13 years later Kris came out of the hospital and wasn't allowed to wear any perfume again and never go to a big heights.