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Thursday, 27 September 2012

The Melting beach

Once upon a time there were two big strong strangers on a beach in Samoa. They were out for a very long time on the beach. If they stayed there even longer they might have melted.

“I know they will melt” I said. They tried to stay there for a very long time but they couldn't. When they reached in their pockets they had no phones because it had been stolen.


So they went in the water to make themselves cold and cool. Some water was all mixed around his body. So they told someone to use their phone please. So they  gave their phones to them and called the doctors to come and take them to the hospital. When they got their they were dieing just in five hours.



In the last minute they nearly died but luckily they made it just in time. After that day they never went to the beach ever again. They lived happily ever
after.

2 comments:

Michelle Detar said...

Hi Faaiua,
My name is Michelle and I am from Mobile, Alabama, United States. I see that you like to write! I do too. Your story was very entertaining and am glad to see that young students are writing creatively. I plan to teach writing one day to students just like you. I hope to read more stories from you!

erin may said...

Hi Faaiua! My name is Erin, and I am a student at the University of South Alabama. I loved how creative your story was! You have a great imagination! I enjoyed reading your story. When I was your age I loved to write creative, and fun stories. Have fun with your writing!

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