Thursday, 28 November 2013

Wednesday, 13 November 2013

Kawau Island

Next week on Tuesday, The Yr 6 boys and girls are going to Kawau Island.
There are 3 activities im absoutlety looking forward to is:
Mr Coops Food
Jumping of the Wharf

There also other activities like:
Swimming and more

Monday, 11 November 2013

The Dragon

There once lived a boy named Jordan. One night he fainted and fell asleep. The next morning, he woke up and he was wearing a crown and his skin colour was green, he had wings like beautiful butterfly wings. Everyone said “Long lived the king”. In the afternoon, he will teach his kids how to fly and teach him how growl. The next day he was flying around and he saw a island.

In that island it had a sign that said “Do not enter”. When he went inside the house in the island, it had a man controlling 3 people at a time. When he saw the man, he tried to kill him but it was too hard because he had a special power. 3 hours later, Jordan figured out a plan. He told his son to  tell the man to meet him at the tallest hill of the village. When he came by the hill, there was no-one there and then out of no-where, he took him and dropped him all the way down the hill and fell into lava. “Yes!”

The next day, he heard a voice saying “Wake up Jordan, Wake up Jordan!!” The voice got louder and louder and then he woke up from a dream and he told the dream to his mother.

Wednesday, 6 November 2013

Monday, 4 November 2013

The Whisperer

Walking from school, Vaifoa heard a familiar noise coming from a empty dark farm. Walking inside with muddy feet, Vaifoa heard a secret message. Calling across the farm “STOP, STOP, STOP!!!” Vaifoa was scared and nervous.  Seeing blood everywhere, it got scarier and scarier. When Vaifoa looked at the entrance it was closed.

Running across the pitched black place. He fell over into a hole which was a shiny bright room which had swords, bows and spears. Then he looked into the mirror and he saw a ghost which was a little boy with freckles. “Ahhh” said Vaifoa. When he looked back there was no-one there. He took the bow and practice aiming for 2 and half hours. When he got out of the shiny bright room he wanted to stay in there for a bit longer but he knew the ghost was in there..

Eating his lunch he heard another noise and everytime he heard that noise he will always use his arrows. 1 more arrow left. He got closer and closer, “No! No! No!” said the mysterious noise. “Its 5:45, ok, 15 more minutes left until night time.

He got closer and closer and when he saw the secret message, it was a goat screaming, he was getting murdered by a teenager. He got out his bow and aimed at the murderer. Beep Beep Beep, the murderer looked at him and killed him then the goat got outraged and hit him and then the ghost came and scared the murderer away. Then the ghost went inside Vaifoa’s body and lived in him forever. Then the goat died many years after and the murderer never came back again.

Friday, 1 November 2013

Show Not Tell

WALT: Show not tell when writing a paragraph.

Light booted shoes, trudging over the smooth footpath. Swishing noises from the furious cars. Loud noises from neighbours shouting and arguing. “Almost there” I said. Friends waving, birds roaring out squeaky noise. Marching down the entrance, I hear an intense noise.