Friday, 1 November 2013

Show Not Tell

WALT: Show not tell when writing a paragraph.

Light booted shoes, trudging over the smooth footpath. Swishing noises from the furious cars. Loud noises from neighbours shouting and arguing. “Almost there” I said. Friends waving, birds roaring out squeaky noise. Marching down the entrance, I hear an intense noise.

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